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[Kill Osama: Mission 2]

Not as good as first one.... still, though...

This wasn't as good as the first one. Less grammer mistakes was a plus, but the ending was.... really bad. I know! You said you had to rush it, but you've gotta think in the long run here. People are gonna be disappointed at the end result. ^^; It's like, "That's it? But in the first one I got to stab, melt the mouth shut, cut off the arms, and pop the eyes out of the last guy, but.... Here all I did was cut his head off." A bit disappointing, but still! Killing terrorists is always good. Kudos, but try a little harder next time, though. You'll thank yourself in the long run.

[Kill Osama: Mission 1]

Grammer, please. X(

Oy, I'm sorry, but the grammer in the game is not.... it's no good. That's not why I give this a four, though. This is a really easy game. ^^; Really easy... animation is a bit to be desired, too, but that's like saying a sprite flash has bad animation, so... good try, but it could be a little more well done.

That being said, I'll give a look at Mission 2 for kicks. It might be better, after all.

Oh yeah, bonus star for terrorist killing. So, it actually gonna be a five.

[Gradation for Beginners]

More like a movie than a game...

I think this'd be suited for a movie... I mean, it's probably confusing because you actually have to interact with it, but it sure is NOT a game. XD

Anyways, whichever, right? This is a good tutorial. It's pretty basic, so that's why I give it a 6. The music that goes with it is nice, too.

K-Guare responds:

Your the second person to say that, so,
i think i'm just gonna label it as a movie.
Thanks for watching ;]

[Mouse Trap]

Really, really, easy game.

This is an okay game. It's not too long and you can beat it in about... 2 minutes, but still, it works. To be honest, I'm giving it a 4 for the music.

Anyways, suggestions! It'd make the game a little more fun if you actually had some "Traps" in "Mouse Trap". Like... moving walls, lasers... I know that's all been done before, but it'd make the game a little better.

Still, it's a working game, at least. I like the music in it. Keep at it!

[How stupid.. Are you?]

Mispelled "You're"

No offense, but after you win.... you misspelled "you're" with "your". No exactly smart saying that to a person "Your(You're) not as dumb as you look."
XD I'm sorry, I had to call you out on that one.

But yeah, this definitely needs improvement. You've got the idea, but... still, this game isn't too fun. Too easy, for one. (Mix it up a little to get someone to trip up on accident. XD) Needs a box to click on, so we don't have to aim for the letters. And.... maybe some background music.

So yeah, You've got the idea, it's just not fun at all, YET. I'm sure you can improve on it, though, right?